Monday, May 18, 2009

The diary of Anne Frank

Act 1,



1. The families must obey strict rules to avoid discovery. Wich rules would be hardest for you to fallow why?



The hardest rule for me to fallow would be not going out side. I think that is very hard because i hate bein stuck inside i get really bored so that would be the hardest thing for me to do. And specially if its for a long time I would probably go crazy.



2 a. In scene 1, what objects does Mr. frank find in the secret room?



Mr Frank found Anne's diary in the secret room.



b. How are these objects connected with the rest of the act?



When he found the diary that was part of the act because thanks to that we got to read anne's diary and we know how she lived while she was hiding.



3a. what speciall meaning does hunukkah have for the families?



The speciall meaning that hunikkah has for the family its because it is a jewish celebration.



b. What does Anne presents show about her?



Anne present shows about her that she cares about the holiday and about her family. She is really in it.



c. Why do the others react with enthusiasm to their presents?



They react with enthusiasm to their present because they wanted to make anne feel good exeped they had no present to give in return.



4a. With a partner, discuss Mr. franks statement " there are... no locks that that anyone can put on your mind " how does Anne aprove to that ?



She approves to that because she thinks that no one can stop you on what you belive for example their religion.



5a. What is the historical cause that forces the Franks to go into hiding?



The cause that force the Franks to hide was because they were jewish and they had to hide with Anne if not they took them to the campus.



b. What affects does this situation have on their daily lives?



The affects that they have on their daily lives is they can not go outside, they have to hide all the time, and they cant make alot of noise.



6a. What affects do the Nazis intend the wearing of the stars to have on jews?



The star tell the diference between the jews and the Nazis.



b. What background information about the war and the Nazis treatment of the jews helps you link this cause with its intended affects?



The intended affects that cause the Nazis treatment was that the jews had to hide and fallow alot of rules and that caused alot of death to.



7. complete an organized like the one shown with examples of dialogue that achive each purpose.



DIALOGUE

-> Reveals character and relationships ________



8. After Mr. kraler ask if Jan dussel can join the franks and the vanndans in hiding, what does the dialogue among the characters reveal about their personalities?





Act 2, pg 87o



1. what do you like best about Anne frank? how would you like having her as a friend?



What I like best about Anne Frank is that she is really smart when it comes on making comments. She is also very brave and has allot of faight. I would like having her as a friend because she is some one that is very faithful.



2a. What disturbing news does Mr Kraler bring on new years day?



The disturbing news that Mr kraler brings on new years day was that the man that worked in the store told Mr. kraler to sign some papers and then he said he remember their was a door their and he knew that people were hiding so he wanted more money.

b. What hint does this give you about the ending of the play?

The hint that gives me about the end of the story is that if they dont pay more money to that man he is going to tell and their all going to get caught.

3a. What is the time span of act II?

The time span of act II was one year and a half.


b. How have the characters changed sence sice the end of act 1?

The chracters have changed alot in the second part for example their all worried and scared and have givin up on themself.

c. How do you know that Anne has change?

I know that Anne has cahnged because before she thought that one day she would be able to go outside but things were getting worser so she kind of lost her faith.

4a. How can Anne belive that " ... in spite of everything... people are really good in heart?"

Anne belives that because she knows that their is some good people out their even if its really deep inside of their hearts.

b. What does Mr.frank mean when he says: " She puts me to shame?

What Mr. Frank means when he said she puts me to shame is that after everything they whent threw she still thinks that. And he probably things that every one is the same.

5a. Mr. Van Daan'd decision to steal food.

Sence he stoled the food he made him self look like a jerk and their wasent enough for every one and that becaume a big problam.

b. Mrs. Franks change of heart about wanting the van daans to leave.

Mrs. Franks dosent whant the Van Daans to live because they would be less and she feels bad.

6. What are some possible causes of Mrs,. Van Daan attitude toward Anne and peters relationship?

Mr. Van Daan always thinks wrong and their probably not going to like her.

7. Living in close quarters has multiple effects on the resident of the " secret Annex" list three effects that result from his single cause.

* Theirs was not much room
* They couldent go outside
*And they couldent make much noise

8a. Character / Action / Motivation
----------- --------- ------------
Miep Brings flowers It was new years
To the attic rooms

Mr.Van Dan Eat the food Every one was
mad becase their not
enouh food

Peter he brought his cat it made him company

9. They were hungry and theyfelt lonley


Friday, May 8, 2009

solving problems on the streets.

There is a serious problems on the streets that people don’t like for example living trash all over the park were kids go to have fun. And they could get sick.
When people leave trash in the parks parents get scared that with all that trash they might get sick because of the germs sense we don’t know were they have been.
And also broken bottles of beer and they could get cut with the glass.

Also some people leave needles and things that kids could get hurt with.
One solution that I think will work to make parks better is by every parent that takes their kids to that park should take a plastic bag with them and go around picking up the trash before their kids go out and play and they also should take a bottle of hand sanitizer so when their done playing.
A lot of people leave trash behind and they don’t even border to pick it up.
Kids could get the flu if they touch the thing that the other person
throw and specially if they were sick and had a cold.
Another way why this could make kids get sick is by them picking
up things that can be contaminated and put it on their mouths.
Alot of things have been touched by a lot kids and they may be so
dirty and it is discosting.
Parents should watch out on what kids touch because if not their kids are going to get sick of something and it may not be just the flu or a cold.
Also drunk people just go and throw their bottles of beer in the park.
When they throw it eventually breaks and when kids are and they fall a glass could get stuck to them.
They could get cut by it and get hurt. Or the glass may have any infection and if kids get cut by them then they could also get sick by that This is another thing to be careful on with your kids because if you don’t then that can be a bad consequence.
People that drug them selves with needles leave the needles after
Their done using them in the park and it could have any kind of desi
.If kids pock them self with them then they may get the same
Infection that the other person that use it had.
Some of them got serious problems and they may be sick of something really bad
When they leave the needle that have been used the kids can see them doing it and if they leave some in there the kids might want to do it and they can kill themselves with the drugs that are in there.
These can cause pain to your kids.
There are the serious problems on the streets when they leave trash and the kids touch it or put it on their mouth or even het cut with glass or needles. Every one should protect and watch their kids or do you want your kid to get sick because of other people?

Wednesday, May 6, 2009

Hansel and gretel

One day me and my brother Hansel were trying to go to sleep but our poor tummies hurted of hunger. My dad had not much to feed us it was only me my brother my dad and my step mother who lived in a little house close to the forest. As me and my brother were trying to go to sleep we hared my dad and step mother discussing something i knew it wasn't good to here their conversation and the best way not to it was to sleep but we just couldn't. I heard my dad say that what were they going to do with us because they did not had much to feed us my mean step mother said that they should aboden us in the forest and that way they would get ride of us. My dad did not agree with that at first but then he said OK I started to cry of fear when Hansel said he will find a way to be safe i did trusted him. He graved his little jacked and put pebbles on his pocket.


My step mother woke us up saying that we would go to the forest to cut some wood we knew what was happening. When we got their they told us to save the bread because later on we would not have non. So we did they started a fire and said they would come back very soon. Night came and they were not here. As soon as the moon riced we walked and fallowed the pebbles when we saw a little house it was my dads we were so happy because we made it so we knock on the door and their they saw us they were not so happy to say they put us to sleep. My step mother had woken us up and said that we would go to forest and cut some wood we knew what was going to happen but this time we did not had any more pebbles i made my bread into crumbs so we could get back home. When we tried to go back home the birds had eat the crumbs of bread.


Few days pass and I new that we would die of hunger. But we saw this beautiful white Bird sing very nice and we fallowed it as it flu away. We saw a house with sugar windows and allot of thing I eat the windows and my brother eat the roof when an old lady come out. She brought us in the house and feed us really good then we fell asleep in two soft comfortable beds. But she took my brother and locked him she made me cook for him and she told me that once he got fat she would kill him. I got scared and we lasted like that few days when she said it was time to cook him. We end up burning her and she did I was so happy because we were safe. But we still did not know our way back home. We had no way to cross there was no bridge and them we saw a duck which crossed us over as we keped on walking we saw my dads home we ran in and hugged my dad. My step mother had died and he was not a happy man. I knew that what my dad had done was not right but after all he was my dad and I would still love him and we lived together for ever....=]

Friday, May 1, 2009

Fables

One day a little bird was trying to fly but he just couldn't with out some one teaching him how to. He thought that he was never going to learn how to. All his brothers new how to fly and he just watch them as he wish he new how to. When his mommy came back he asked why cant I fly mommy she said because your special and one of a kind. He asked her what do you mean mommy she said just follow me do as I say the next thing you know he was flying.

Anything could come out right with your moms next to you.

Wednesday, April 29, 2009

The outcast of poker flat

If you had to blame some one or something for the outcast death's who/what would you blame & why?
-Uncle Billy
-citizen's or poker flat
-bad luck
-outcast

If I had to blame some one or something I would blame uncle Billy. The reason why I would blame him is because he took the horses. If he had not taken them every one would of not had died. And he did not tell anyone were he was going. He probably left the other people worried since he rand away with the horse. I think Uncle Billy did survive. But that is mean because he just left with everything and he did not even tried to take some one with him he just wanted everything for himself. That is why I blame him I know that everything is not his fault but they probably would of got safe and not died. And if he did got safe then he would of probably came back for the others. At least he would of told some one were he was going for encase of something they new which way to find him or which way he went. This are my reasons why I blame uncle Billy for the death of other people and probably if it wasn't for him at least half of them would of being safe.

Tuesday, April 28, 2009

Kate Chopin

The story of an hour...

This story about a woman that her husband controlls her and one day she receives a news that her husband is dead she faked she was sad but she really wasn't. All she thought about was her freedom and how life would be with out her husband controlling her and telling her what to do. All do she sees her husband walk in and she gets a heart attacked every one thinks is of happiness but actually because she did not expected that. She was free at last and got her freedom but not the way she wanted for it to be. The way freedom is involve in this story is by a woman that wants to be like other out their as she watches every one out the window she cant wait to be like them and her husband dis not let her do anything. I did liked this story because it is interesting but what its sad about it is that she dies I did not expect that to happen and I did learned something from it and that is to enjoy life the way it is and not let no one control me so I wont end up like her.


The blind man...

This story is about an old blind man and it involves poor and rich. The way their involved involved in this story is by the old man being poor he goes around selling pencils for his living. As he walks in the street with hunger and thirst no one come out and help him and since he is blind he do not know were the shade is. Every one closes their windows as he walks by they lock their gates but then a very known person get rand over when they find out who it is every one comes out and and the old guy wonders why out of all those nosy people no one goes to help him they ignore the poor and and instead of helping him they help the rich. I do like this story but its sad how he is walking in his conditions with no help that makes me feel bad. What I learned about this story is that no matter if people are poor or rich we are all still the same and their is no difference and now I am going to help the people that really need it.


Desiree's baby...


The way that racism is in this story is because Desiree husband is raises against black people and he ends up not liking his son because he is dark and since the baby's mom was found he really don't know her culture and he thinks she is the one that is black he sends them of back with her mom when he finds a letter saying that he is black after that no one knows what happen. I really did liked this story but its mean how he trits his slaves. What I learned about this story is that it don't matter the color you and we are all still people and we deserves the same life because their not any difference on why or how to be treated.

Friday, April 24, 2009

Dr. Heideggers's Experiment

My name is Dr. Heidegger and I am writing down the reactions on my experiment.
I gave the drink to the four people that I am doing my experiment on. I had test this on a speciall flower with a great meaning to me. Well they do look a little younger but they want more so I am going to give them more to see what happens. They all drinked another cup of it because their getting desperate to get younger. As their drinking more they are getting younger but theirs a big problem their all doing the same mistakes they did before and that is not helping them. One of the mistakes that cause me something was that their fighting over a girl and they brooked my water. There all going crazy and the worst thing is that i don't know what is going to happen next. They all like being younger but theirs and to me is just like a waist of time. I turned around and saw that the flower turn back the way it was and the bead thing is that their is not no more of that special water a few minutes later the people turned back the way they were and now their all going crazy to look younger that there even going to go look for some. What I learned about this experiment is that why go back if you are going to make the same mistakes just life your life like your supposed to and that's I good thing I did not drink ed that because if I did I would of probably end up like them.

Thursday, April 23, 2009

Desiree's baby, the sequel

What I think is going to happen next is that Armand is going to apologize to his wife now that he knows that he is the one that's dark and he had blamed it on her. But he is not going to tell her the raise of what he really is . I also think that he is not going to tell no one because since he is an important person and that may affect him since he is a very known person even do he is a jerk. At first I thought he was going to apologize to his workers and let them free but then he wont have no servants so basically he is going to just keep it to him self. Because then he wont be that great person he is known as. And he cares more on what people think of him and he just wants to be known as the great but he don't care how hard his workers work. Even do I wish he was like a normal man for example care about his family and not worry on how important he is. Aldo its impossible but he would probably change in time. I think Armand s going back for his wife now that he knows that its not her fault. And also for his kid because that baby boy carries his mom raises. He is know going to try to find out the real truth about his mom and probably that will change the way he looks at things for example slavery is one. He is going to compare his kid with the slave and he wont want that for his child so he might change. And be nice to all the people he has as working on slavery because he is the same like them and also his mom. And now that he found out the Truth about his real raise he is probably not going to like it.

Wednesday, April 22, 2009

Flowers for Algernon

If you were given a choice to have an operation that would make you smarter would you do it , especially you know the effects of the surgery would be only temperately why or why not?

If I were given a chance to have an operation to become smarter I would not take that chance. I would rather be the way I am. Why would I get smart for a will when then its all going to get taken away? That would hurt me more noying that I go from smart to stupid. Either way I would probably already be use to it. If I were to take that chance after everything it would be a big hit and very surprising because I would be very sad that I wont be smart no more. I know that it would be very nice to be smart but whats the point even if your smart or you are not you still breath the same theirs not going to be a big difference but that you will get lower grades. And probably they will make fun of you but I would rather be who I really am and not what others want me to be. Another reason why I wont take that chance would be because I would be really scared that the operation comes out wrong and it affects me even more. I understand that being smart id a good thing because you pass your classes and you look like a genius. But not when its only for a while I could not imagine how sad it would be when you wake uo noying that your the same as before and all that time you were smart is now the pass and it was all like a dream.


If your smart you could do allot of things and they wont trick you with your change for example if you go to the store and they don't give you the correct change back you would know because yo could count it on your head. But if your not smart its really easy for them to trick you. It would be kind of weird if they you go to the store and count everything on your head and the person that charges you is amazed and that every time you he recognizes you but then you again and he doesn't know how much it is he would think your crazy. Because everything would be a big change in your life.This are my reasons why I would rather not take the chance on becoming smart.

Friday, April 17, 2009

The curious case of benjumin botton chapter 8-the end

Family:
In the story family was defined as something else or at least not the way that I think family should be. For example in the story family is known as embarrassment. That not really a good thing. Roger was embarrassed of his dad and made him say that was his uncle. That made Benjumin feel bad and was not happy. I think that he was sad because his own son was ashamed of him and to me that's not how family should be but this is how family is defined in the story. I understand that as he was getting younger his family wanted him to change but that was not his fault and they should of under stood him and accepted him for the way he was not the way they wanted him to be or look and act. I think every thing would of being different if he wasn't to be born the way he did. Every thing would of probably be normal.

Age:
Age is very important in this story. Benjumin was born old and died as a baby he was the opposite of what he had to be. But age is defined in the story as the younger you are the better you look and because of that Benjumin dad and son were embarrass of him. As Benjumin was younger he was looking better then he did when he looked older. They also did not let him to allot of things because the age he looked. The reason why they were embarrass was because when Benjumin was born he looked older then his dad but then he looked younger then his son. They made him say he was another person to not embarrass them. And it all had to do with his age. As he got younger he wanted to party even do he had a wife that was old but he was like a teenager.

Beauty:
The way beauty was involved in this story has to do some thing like with the age for example when Roger meet his wife she was beautiful but as she got old she got wrinkled and grayish hair and look ugly. He was embarrass of walking with her and going out with her but she looked way older then him and he saw that every thing that attacked her to him went away staring with her beauty. But that was not his fault that he was changing the way he felt about her but it was that he was getting younger and was tired of her just wanting to sleep all the time and watch tv but all her beauty whent away.

Thursday, April 16, 2009

The curious case of benjumin button chapter 3-7

After reading chapters 3-7 predict three problems you think benjumin will encounter and give your solution?

If Benjumin is looking younger each year my prediction would be that he is going to end up looking like a baby and move with his parents sense he cant take care of himself.

Now that he left his wife for being old my prediction would be that he is going to find some one else younger when he goes out to party some were and fall in love again and even might get married.

Benjumin was born as old man and now that he is looking younger I predict that he is going to die when he is a baby is just like the opposite. That would be kind of sad because is like noying how much time you have left to live and if he gets a new wife the same thing would happen she is going to be old comparing to him.

Wednesday, April 15, 2009

The curious case of benjumin botton in chapter 2

Roger is so overly concert with how benjumin looks is worried about what people are going to say. What should he do?

He should die his hair and say that its not his so he wont be embarrassed of walking with him. But he should offer 50000 dollars to who ever wants him and never return him back. Even do probably wont want him but that case he should drop him of in a old people hospital. That would help him to get ride of him. And that way he don't have to tell no one who is he and wont be embarrass to be with him. It must be horrible to have an old man as your child.

The curious case of benjumin botton chapter 1

What would you have done if you were roger button in chapter 1?

If I were to be Roger button I would to take the kid and loss him some were and people would think of his as a bum and no one will ever know it was mine. And if people ask me on the way on finding a place to drop him of that who is he I would say my grandpa. But if encase he says hes my kid I would say that he was at a crazy hospital and that is why he don't come to visit as much. I would loss him in another state far far away to never see him again. Because who would believe that an old man is a guy son no one because the kids are not older then the parents and it would be really weird to walk with an old man as your child. I would be really scared if they say that the old man is my child probably ill faint specially if he is ugly.

Monday, April 13, 2009

A true best friend

A true best friend….


Best friends are always their for each other
Even if we get into arguments
Sisters is what were more likely called
Together we always are
Friends well always be
Respect well always have
Incase were not together I will never for get our friend ship
Even if I am dead
Never ever forget that ill be with you till the end
Don’t matter if were far away our

Friend ship will never end
Or never will be erase
Replace you I cant
Even if I loose my head it was
Very nice meeting you
Even do we started of as friends and ended as sisters you will never be
Replace and that’s why I call you my best friend….

Monday, March 30, 2009

A picture is worth a thousans words


It was a very sunny day that the sun woke me up and I knew it was time to help my dad Omar in the farm. But their was not much to do well feeding the animals was imposable we do not have much food to feed them and I always felt sad about it. We sometimes don't have food to feed our self so every day we have to have some left overs for the next day. So all I did was clean up with my dad I love to help him because I wanted to be like him. While me and my brother Armando were helping my dad my mom Sandra was cooking and my sister Jasmin was helping her and so was my grandma Alma. I was really hungry sense we did not had nothing last night my tummy hurted. I heard my mom shout out dinner time I raned inside and tripped I did hurt my knee I was wishing for it to not get infected. Every time I got hurt my mom would grave a piece of clothing and put alchol but this time I was hungry that I did not even care.


When we sat down I knew that we could of only grave a little piece and save some for my dad. He was still hard working. He raised our pigs and, the horse, chicken's, roosters, cows, sheep's and then he soled them and we also eat them. I washed my hands ans sat down we all eat but I still wanted more. My sister always cared about the animals she cut half of her food and gaved it to the horse my mom did the same thing. While the dog begged for food I did not know what to do or how to help my family we all wanted a better life everything we had was not enough. When my grandma was sick we did not had enough money for the medicine and that's what got me sad. I always imagine how life would of being if we had what we needed but like daddy said we have one another and were going to work hard to feed the family.He always cheered me up and made me feel better. And everything I had I was proud of it because we got it from working.


My grandma was cutting the delicious bread. But it was hard because we had it for three days and that's what we had to eat. My mom made two pies but we had to safe one for the next day. It was going to be hard by then. While I was siting at the table we could of here the dog crying and the birds singing but besides that every thing was quiet. My brother Armando always had more food. And I did not think that was fair it was probably because he was. They trieded me more like a slaves even do I was smaller I had to work more. I did not complained about it but why me? That night I found out that I was only their god brother and my real mom had died of an infection. But after all the hard work they made me do I was proud to call them my parents..

Wednesday, March 25, 2009

pet peeves

1. When they make me clean my room
2. When people slam there books on the floor
3. I don't like when people go throw my private stuffs
4. Another thing is when people do any kind of noise with their nails
5. When my mom makes me go to the store for her
6. When my sister makes me get up in the morning
7. And when I go to the store and they don't got my favorite kind of candy
8. Specially when they make me walk for nothing
9. When people rub things in my face
10.And when people get in other people business
11.When people don't admit things
12.Or when people cry for attention
13.And when people make me do things more then once
14.It gets me mad when people bug me to much
15.And when I have to help my little sister with her homework
16.Or when a baby cries
17.And when people give me the worst excuse for something
18. What gets me mad is when I have to go to school and its raining
19.I hate when theres no more cheese for the nachos
20.I don't like when I have to go get shots
21. And the worst thing that I hate is when people know they need help but when I want to helped them they get mad
22.And when people think then better then others
23.And when people annoy me on purpose
24.When people try to acted hard
25.And when people borrow things and when they give it back there all destroyed

Monday, March 23, 2009

the secret

It was my best friends deepest dark secret and it would be hard to keep. It all started one day when I was in class and my best friend Gloria passed me a note it said " I need to tell you something its a secret lets go get a ice cream after school" I did right back I told her that it was fine. When my last class finish I went to look for her at her locker and got her books.
Gloria: SO are we going to get an ice cream? I said yes sure lets go as we were walking I saw a weird expression on her face it looked like she was up to something but at the same time she was nervous and scared . I asked her what wrong with you she said that it was part of the secret and that she was going to tell me in the ice cream store.

When we got their I order a strawberry ice cream with sprinkles on it she order a milk shake. When we sat down to eat the Delicious ice cream she told me that she had to tell me some thing and I said go on tell me. I did not expected it to be bad when she told me that she lost a bet and she had to put a house on fire and it was a secret because after she put it on fire no one was going to know it was her.
Gloria: you could not say nothing because I am going to be in really big trouble and I am trusting you please don't say nothing.

I did not know what to tell her but she was going to put other people on risk to. She did trust me but I just couldn't do that to her it was wrong but it would be bad if I did not tell no one either. It would be like if I was participating on it to by not saying the true. Gloria: Thank you listening to me your the best friend ever. At that time I felt bad to be trait her. As I was walking home I couldn't stop thinking about it. Before I went to sleep I had a call and it was her to thank me again but I asked her what about if you don't do it Gloria : said they said that they would do something very bad and surprising to me and now I am scared. I told her to don't do it that they would probably be just lien. Gloria: theirs was no way back I cant do nothing about it.

I did got scared and all I thought was a way to stop her from hearting some one. I decided to go up to the people that dared her and I told them that if they touch her or some one around her or do something to hurt her they would be in bigger trouble. The next day I told my friend what had happened and I told her that they were not going to touch her and we decided to tell the principle to be more protective and he made sure no one would touch her. Gloria: Thank you I am sure that telling you was the best idea and that is why your my best friend. I felt proud that no one was hurt but at the beginning I wasn't sure of keeping the secret but I am glad I dint.

Thursday, March 19, 2009

Her mysterious death

Her death was due to mysterious circumstances and I was assigned to the case. It was January 20, 2009 when it was Jenifer and her husband Omar anniversary. They had made five years but everyone new that in those five years they did not had a good marriage. They always fought as so the neighbors had told. Jenifer and her husband Omar had 3 kids Janely, Mary and Erik. They had the age of 10,7 and 3. They were not very happy kids after all the only thing that they did after school was play in their backyard but they only had one old squeaky swing.

The kids had their own counselor because they would not talk to no one. When you looked at them they looked like if they wanted to tell you something but they couldn't. The neighbors had thought of that as suspicious and weird. And the mom almost never went outside. It was mostly her husband Omar that worked and went out. And old lady that lived next door had seen him get out of his truck with flowers. He always just to hit his wife in front of his kids. Why flowers now?

The that day was their anniversary so I thought that was probably the case why the flowers were for. The old lady said that after she had seen him 20 minutes later some one knocked at her door and she did not know who it was because no one came to visit her. When she opened she saw Omar and Jenifer she said what happen the wife never said nothing it was the husband that did all the talking. He had asked her take care o their kids for less then a week because they were going out. She said sure after all does kids did not looked like trouble makers and probably that trip would help out their marriage.

Omar got his truck ready and had a blanket with allot of types of knife why did he need them for?

The wife did not wanted to get inside the truck. And the old lady could of seen her looking back trying to tell her something. After that she did not know what happen. That day at 8:11 some one had made a call to 911 and said nothing absolutely nothing we could of only hear whispers. They did not know were the call came from. More then one week passed and the lady still had no news about the kids parents so she called the police and they send me to investigate the case.


In my car I went all around searching to ask people if they seen them but no they did not. While I was putting all the pieces in a big puzzle a thought I should check around tomorrow again. And so I did I left out of my house at six in the morning and at nine I found a woman's body in between the trees. I called out for more help. When my other helpers arrived we found the lady she looked death from back their and when we got close to her she like beat up. I asked my helpers how long does she look like she has been dead for they said more then a week. I asked my self a question is this the kids mom?

We did not know who the lady was. That lady had a purse by her side and with nothing in it only few pens a lip gloss. The lady had a note in her for head it said this was a very special woman but she did not follow my directions and look at what happen to her. We all got scared but at least we had a clue saying that she was murder. We were getting closer and closer to find out who that lady was and how she died. But this time I really thought that it was does kids mom. She had long black hair and really black shiny eyes, she also was not dark. Just liked that lady had describe her to me.

The next day we receive a phone call from the lady saying that the kids parents had apeird. That was good for one part but then who was that other lady? Why did she had a note in her for head? And how was she killed? It was all mysterious. But what really creiped me out was that the dead lady looked just like the kids mom. I thought that it was her because of a picture we had. The old lady said that when they came to pick up the kids only the dad came and she really did not see if the mom was home because she never went outside. And that was really mysterious. We found out that Omar had killed her because she refused to getting the car. It was so sad and the kids end up going for adoption and the dad was in jail it was good that the mystery was solved at all.

Wednesday, March 18, 2009

How to make Logandale better

People could make Logandale a better school in different ways. Logandale is not that bad to say but it could be better then it is. By changing few things that kids don't like could attracted more student. For example they could tell their friends from other schools what is going on and they would like to move in a school that sounds more fun and better.

One thing that would make Logandale a better school would be more activities. Like more sports or any kinds of things like that. What I mean by that is like have a big field with a lot or courts to play basket ball or soccer. Kids would go crazy if they see that they have a lot of room to play. And in the summer kids need their exercise and that would be very helpful also have kids inside all day. They should take away 5 minutes from every one's class to be outside. We should also have a nice garden and all the kids could plant and discover new plants and animals that would be so much fun.

Another thing that would make students want to come to Logandale would be better lunch. Some kids get tired of eating the same things over and over. That makes us want to throw up and its discus ting. They also give us milk with food that is so nasty but you don't got any other way or at longest you by the juices that they sell but some kids don't have enough money or cant afford it. To make that better we should change the menu and get new food. They should also sell anything that kids would like. For example a machine that sells sodas or more type of juices. And in the Summer we should eat outside like if it was a picnic.


The last thing that I would like for Logandale to change the rule that they be so picky on the uniform. Like if you wear something that is not bad they still make you wear some ugly shirts. Then they don't let you wear any mixed colors because we could get in danger if were in school there is no need to worry. But they said that outside the school we could either way we could change outside the school and wear those colors that is why it don't make sense to me. They could at least let us wear any color.


These are the changes that they should fix or change to attacked more students because if not their going to loose students because its boring. I know that were supposed to study but we could do that and have at least some time of fun and that way kids when they go outside they would take out all their energy and be ready to learn in other classes. And that would dis tracked them allot. And focus better on the next class.

Monday, March 16, 2009

Dalia Arevalo life story

The day 11-21-94 was like an americle that was the day my daughter Dalia was born. Since that day I have been so happy till now. I am very glad that I gave birth and that now she is my daughter. Dalia is the oldest one from another two theirs three in total. The day I found out I was pregnant a big smile came to my face because I knew she would be special in every way. But the best part was when I first heard her cry that was when she first came out. I knew that I would never be disappointed of having her. When we took Dalia back home every one wanted to carry her because she was the only grand daughter and niece. She was the only baby that had been in all the family so every one went crazy.


When she got to be one year old we did a big party to celebrate her birth day. Since she was the only one. That age was like very special because that is when she said her first word and started to walk and even eat by her self. Since that day I knew she wasn't a baby she was little but know she new how to do things on her own. It was kind of sad because I wanted Dalia to be a baby but I was happy that my daughter did not needed my help as much. And I knew she was growing really fast. When she knew how to walk she just to hide things from us and she went crazy runing around distroying the place. That just how she had fun.


When she was two years old She knew how to speak perfect and did not needed no help from me at all she did not like it when I halped her she thought she could of do things on her own. That made me proud that she learned her the first steps in life. And that is when I decided that she needed another sister. At this age we moved to Chicago but I was already pregnet. I did not wanted to tell her into we got their. When we gaved her the big news she did not liked it at all because she was very spoiled by every one because she was the only one. When I finish telling her she starded to cry I felt sad but I knew that she would need another sister or brother around her age so they could of always be together every were.


Once she was three her sister was already born she got very jeulos and did to wanted to eat. She just to cry alot and I couldent pay to much attention to her because I would always be ither feading the other baby or changing her diper. So I had to sign her in to a daycare. She thought that I was trying to get ride of her or something. And she just to not like the baby. Dalia would throw toys at the crib to hit her or put her blanket to move her closer and try to bit her. She turned very evil but I did not blamed her she was just jeulos.

Once se was four years old her sister was like two or about to turn two. Thats when they starded to play with each other and got more along. But she just to get mad because all the litle one did was throw the toys and Dalia just to cry because the other did not know how to play. And then every thing she had they had to share and the pissed her of all the time. And what made her more angry was that when we went to the store nd she would of get a toy we made her put it back because we needed to buy diapers.



Now that she was five she did whent to school and she was not like other kids that cry for evey thing she would of understand when you told her to stop. She was not much of and trouble maker to say. She was always shy and quiet and very nice to every one like if she had a last piece of gum she would give it away even if she did not had some enough for her. She rather see other people happy even if they did not apreciated but that is just how she was.



When she was six she just to take care of her sister alot she just to defend her from every one and she did not let no one scream at her sister she would cry if you blamed something on her sister she did not liked that. She was never a trouble maker she was always very calm and never got any bad news of her behaivier.


When She was nine we moved to texas. It was better the schools were better the weather ws better and the place was better I knew that they were going to have fun their. And so they did but me and her dad got in an big argument and the next day we moved back in to Chicago they did not had time to say good bey to their friends or anything. Dalia was sad and by then I had another baby it was a girl again. And once we got to Chicago they moved in to Avondale for fourth grade.

When she turned 10 or 11 she was alreay in fixth grade and thats when we decided to stay in that school sence we lived close to their. She lowerd her grades when we moved but it was probably because all that was going on. She wasent the same for few years intil I got back with her dad.

Then when she was like 12 she came to Logandale and started sixth grade. She was very nice like she would never get yelled at by a teacher and every teacher told me that she was a very good student and that she was a plesure to have in class. I was proud of really proud of her because she was doing well.

When she was 13 She was in seventh grade and she knew people and friends more. Dalia loved to help people. But she is really shy and quiet like a lot i do not know why she was like that. And when kids do something to her she would stay quiet just so that does kids wont get in trouble. She do not like to see people having any trouble because she would run to help that person no matter who it is she is very help full.

Now she is 14 and she is still the same way but now she is in eight grade. And she is getting ready to go to high school. But she fights a lot with her sister over clothes or anything. This year hopefully she graduated from the eight grade and I would be so proud of her. Dalia is a very nice person and theirs is no dough about that. And I am proud that she is my daughter.

Thursday, February 26, 2009

life changing event

The day my sister was born changed my life it felt like a big huge tornado had past by. It was like the worst thing ever. When I was born I was the only child from all the family so I was spoiled but when my sister came every thing changed because since that day they dint pay allot of attention to me. People and family members would go visit and usually they would go with a little gift for me and yeah they did came in with big gift I thought it was my birthday but not it wasn’t for me. I was really joules because all I could here is the new baby that made me so mad. I just to bite my sister and throw her toys. And when the baby cried my mom would run to see and when I call her she would be like wait im washing the bottles or im putting the baby to sleep so shut up your going to wake up the baby or things like that.

But that was not the worst part when we got older she just to blame every thing on me and since she was little they would believe her. When she was born I was like two so I was the baby for two years and when she was born she was the baby for five years so she had more time of being the baby witch it was not good. They would of buy her more stuff like pampers and milk but back then I dint understood that it was things she needed I thought that it was because they loved her more. But as we get older and older it gets worse for example now at this age we fight allot I mean allot even for the smallest thing we make it into big deal like if she wears my clothes I scream at her or if I were her clothes she makes me do some thing for her and if I don’t do it she gets me back with some thing else. Its just horrible or if not she tells me that she is going to tell my mom something ive done bad before so I could get in trouble. I do it to and more then her. Or when my mom calls me and tells me to go throw out the trash I tell my sis my mom called and said for you to go throw it out and she believes me.


Another thing is that when we make a mess we blame it on each other. But to me she is the biggest night mare any one could ever think of. She is not a normal person she is some kind of alien that came from space. Because she right now she is happy and next thing you know she is mad. And when she is mad she looks like an oger. And I have to deal with her all day and all she does is complain. I think that is the only thing that she actually knows how to do. One thing that I actuctually like about her is that I could be laying down with the house a mess and she would scream allot but she would clean it because she hates the house to be dirty and she does all the work that is really great =). But she is really bossy. And has a bad attitude with every one. And when she gets mad she shuts the door in my face.

And when she does some thing bad she laugh. She think she’s funny like a clown but no she looks like a one. I do love to have a sister because we cover up for each other and I will tell her ooh no don’t do that and I would expect her to listen but no she don’t care she would do it on purpose so I could get mad and she would tell me oooh your not my mom and that gets me mad because im just trying to help her. That y I wish I was the youngest one but im the oldest. She is more of a trouble makers and she’s proud of it. I think that is all I can say about the monster named Valerie. Ooh one more thing she hides my things so I cant find them and then she wears them.And that is why my sister made the biggest change of my life if not I woudelnt have to share or fight with no one and be really spoiled well not really because I have another 6 year old sister. But either way I would get what I want.

Tuesday, February 24, 2009

Parents are the best teachers

Parents are the best teachers in many reason for example who could ever teach you better then your parents?Your parents could teach you what is the best for life. Like every thing that you are going to go throw just to prepare you.They will teach you the errors they made so your wont make the same mistakes and learn from them. Who better then that could teach you because they wont lie to you.Your parents are the once that are going to be their for you in every thing and if they went throw the same thing they will understand you and their teaching you that no matter what their always beside you. Parents are the best example ever because you will see up to what point they got to you will learn from their mistakes.


Your parents are the once that are preparing you for life.When you were little your parents teach you how to do every thing alone like your first word or your first step with out them you probably couldn't do anything of does stuff. They will also have patient into you get the hang of things like how eat by your self even if you make a mess or get dirty but all they want is for you to learn something that you need to know in life.So they by you things like supplies for school and that way you can be prepared to learn and do your work. Parents are the once that prepare you to do different kinds of things. They get you shoes for gym and things like that.

I think that with out them we would not be nothing so we should thank our parents for all the hard work. Your parents will tell you the mistakes they made in life and what was the consequence and that way you could learn from them. I don’t think that no one better then that could ever teach you because your parents wont lie to you.The mistakes that your parents may have done you might learn form them.You make things in a better or different way by making things different from them.They wont let you fall for the same things that they did.I don’t think that no one else will want to guide you to the right direction.Parents will always be their for you no matter what and that is a good example to learn from.when you commit a mistake your parents will always be their for you to help you out and to fix that mistakes.
And if they want throw the same things you are on they will understand you and help you the most they can.Its like when you first start to eat by your self you make the mess but then your parents clean it up. But once your old you know that your responsible for what you did.Parents will always want the best for you.



Conclusion: Parents are the best teachers and I have three reasons why for example they teach you what is good and what is wrong. They also prepare you. And are always there for you and help you not to make the same mistakes as they did. I think that parents earn respect because it is not a easy job to do.

Thursday, February 19, 2009

A skill every one needs

A skill that every one need is to know math like count, multiply, divide, add, and subtract basically the most basic things. With out math you would be lost out their noying that you have bills in your hand but not know how much their worth for. Or when you go to the store and they give you the wrong change. How would you know how much your suppose to get back? Or even if you work and the boss give you less money as your payment. Every one would think its fun to trick you because you don’t know math and you wont find a job very easily because mostly every thing needs to do with math but to go clean bathrooms.


What I mean by that you may have bills in your hand but not know how much their worth for is that like if you got three singles and to for five you wont know how much it is because you don’t know how to add. You just wont know if you have enough for the bus or train or to buy your lung because you don’t know exactly how much money you got in your pockets. I would feel embarrassed knowing that I have money but not how much and what can I do with them. People would think your stupid. Probably you will go to the store and take anything you want only with a dollar and it will be so embarrassing that you hold back the line just to count and make sure like 50 times.

Or if you go to the store and give a twenty dollar bill and it was only three and give you to dollars back you wont know how much It is. People will still from you and you wont complain about it or nothing. And probably the change that was yours they put it on their pockets and no one will no about it specially if their does little stores that have no cameras only few rows with things. And all you do is walk away thinking that you have the right change. And people will laugh at you for not knowing how to count money or things Imagine you give out 100 dollars just to buy a pack of gum they will charge you like 75 and give back 20. I wouldn't do that to nobody specially if there old and can burly even walk.


Even if you work and when it is pay day your boss give you less or at lest half of what he is suppose to pay you. He wont fire you because you get half less then other workers but work the same or twice more. That is mean because your salary wont be the same as others and your just getting ripped of with out you having any idea of what is going on. The worst thing will be if you cant get a job and only as a cashier but they don’t accepted you for not knowing math or in a bank counting money and then you wont have enough to pay the rent or to buy things that you need for your house like decoration or food for your lunch. And each time they will pay you less. And then they could kick you out of your house or you will be hungry.


These were my reason why knowing math is important to know how to do. They were because you wont know how much money you have or in the store they wont give you the right change and your boss may pay you less then what you are suppose to get pay for your salary. That is why I think people should know how to count and add every thing that has to do with math. Or at least carry a calculator with you to do the adding for you and that is only if you know your numbers. It is sad to know that as you walk in the streets people recognize you by knowing that they could ripe you of or that you don't know math and they take advantage of you and you would be their favorite costumer.

Tuesday, February 17, 2009

"The best day ever"

One of the best day ever was when me and my friends went to the movies. We had saw a scary 3d movie we had the glasses and eat popcorn, soda, candy, and nachos. We were full but we still had a good time. It was funny because when we got to the door they had rand out of glasses but we had good luck and they brought more. As we walked in we thought that there wouldn't be no one so then we turned around and it was full with only two rows in the very front left. Every one looked like bugs with the glasses. When we were walking to the seats Jasmin drooped almost have of the popcorn. We started laughing because we left the mess their and when we sat down she drooped it again and she dint even had the glasses on yet. Then Jessica was acting like if she dint see nothing when the things pooped out of the screen. We did crazy things specially Jasmin because she was testing during the movie. And my sister just keep ed jumping every time she got scared. It was embarrassing to me they interrupted the movie on purpose. When the movie was over we went to the bathroom and in a machine they sell candy and lip gloss. And we bought some candy but we wanted more and they cost 75 cents and i had no more change so we put 5 cents on the machine and it wouldn't twist. And I think we brooked it or at least it got stock and wouldn't let the money come out. Then we were taking pictures doing crazy things in the bathroom. During the movie when we were eating nachos so we put jalapenos and we raised to see who could of eat the most we were just goofing around. After all that we went to that place were theirs machines so you could play and you need tokens to play we were just their not letting people get on acting like if we were playing and people were in line and we had not even put a token and we keeped on letting each other cut while people were complaining. When we got to the house we were scared and keep ed telling each other things to get scared we all ran ed to the bed and were crowded. That day it was Omar birthday party so we called him to tell him happy birthday so as soon as we heard some one pick up we signed and said " we love you Omar" When we here the person that had a phone saying I love you to Omar we started to laugh because it was Jessica brother the on that we were talking to. So then we signed again but that time it was really Omar we made sure of that. That day it was me ,Blanca, Jasmin, Jessica and my sister. More people were going to come with us but they dint. So that was the best day ever because I was with the people I love and we had a great time together like friends. They all wanted to sleep over but there mom did not let them that was the only part we dint liked but other then that we had the best day ever. So my mom drooped them of in a car so they wouldn't go walking by them self and it was cold to go out and walk like that in the streets. So we when we drooped them of that was when the fun stooped. But we had a great time because we were all together that day.

Tuesday, February 10, 2009

her smile

When I looked at her smile I knew she was up to something. So then I went to the kitchen and saw her talking in a sneaky way but I couldent figure out what. Then I tried to look for more clues that were weird and suspicius. After that out of the no were she just raned out and came back with the same smile. I got worried I thought she was crazy. We went to sleep and the next day she was up really early when she usually wakes up late. I looked for her but she wasent their and her piggy bank that had lots of money was now empty. I didnt know what to do I said to myself " should I ask her what going on or shouldnt I?" But if I did I would let her know that she is beign suspicius and she will stop doing it and I wont find out whats really going on. But what worried me the most was that she kept going out and in with out telling me were she was going and she always asked me that if I could of go with her because she didnt liked to go out alone. And the money in her piggy bank was still not their she had run out with it but never came back with nothing I thought she probably let her friend borrow it. But wait her friends were out that week and were going to come back a day before my birthday so that was inposable. I told my mom what was going on she smiled the same way and gave my sister and envelope with the money that she had gotten from her check and told her "get what you need" and winked at her. Now I was really scared because every thing wasent normal. And I got mad bacuse my mom wouldent tell me nothing she told me"she is just a girl" I told her I know but she is my sister and im worried and that when she told me dont worrie she is probably just fooling around but I know she wasent because when I talked to her she would get really nervous like if she did some thing wrong and was scared for me to catch her. When she was going to bed I asked her what did you do i am not going to tell mom she just told me nothing and im sleppy so I left her alone and turned of her lights. When her friends came back I told her go visit them and asked them how it was sence she didnt went and she told me I dont have time for that. So I fuigured out that she was mad at her friends. But I was also sad because she did not had no more friends well atleast thats what I thought. I was also sad because the next day was my birthday and my sister was not going to feel good to spent the day together like every other year. So she told me today you have to go with our cusen and sleep over because tomorrow is your birthday and their going to take you shoping and out to eat as your birthday gift. I told her and what about you she stood quiet when mom said she is staying here with me dont worry I said well can I take her with me my sister said no because she dint felt good. This time I was really really scared because I thought that my mom dint wanted to worry me that she was going to take her to the hospital and that why she wanted to get ried of me. So the next day mom went to my room took me breakfest and told me to get ready and happy birth day. I asked her and my sister she is not going to come and tell me happy birthday she told me yea she will but right now she is reasting and she put a serius face, I told her mom what is wrong with her she stood quiet and looked down she told me go with your ants and cusen and ill explain you every thing when you come back I said ok. Even do I knew that this would be the worst birth day ever. 15 minues later I heard a car beaping mom scream there here I said I am coming. Then I opened my sister room and said bye she just smile and jumped out of bed took a shower and got ready then she raned to get her bike out will we were driving out of the garage. When I came back I thought I dint wanted to open the door I had a really bad feeling that what was my mom going to tell me would be a bad news. When I took a step foward I saw the light of and all the parking spaces were full but then one car I dint see was my mom so I thought their would be no on home but the door was open with no lock. Why would she live it open if she kows that I have the keys?. So I came in and said im home no one answered back then I here something fall I got scared I thought I was being hunted when I here "surprice" I turned back and their was alot of people that were hiding I was shoked and smile when my mom told me its all thanks to your sister. I saw her friends playing and got happy. But I still wondered why was my sister acting like that. When all the guest left my mom told me that every day she got up early to go buy stuff for the party and she sad that she tried to do it early so I wouldent see her when she came back with stuff. She aslo dint had no more money in the piggy bank because with that she bouth the decorations. And that every time I talked to her she got nervous that she was going to ruend the surprice party. And she was to bussy planing every thing calling people in a saneky way so I wouldent hear her then to be with her friends. I said that explains every thing and smile because it was the best birth day ever and all thanks to my sister and that was the best birth day present any one could of ever gaved me.

Monday, February 9, 2009

25 things i whant to do in my life time

1, I want to go graduate 8th grade
2, I want togo to high school
3, Then I want to got to college
4, And be a nurse or pediatrition
5, I want to buy a car
6, Spend most of the time on party's
7, visit hawaii and got go to the beach
8, And see paris to
9, Be almost all the time with my friends and have fun
10, And work to spend all the money on myself
11,But before having kids I want to party
12, never be home always out in places
13, Help homeless people
14, buy a house
15, get married
16, save money
17, Get everything ready for a baby
18, When I know I have enough to afford a baby have 2 or 3
19, Travel with them
20, Take them to new places
21, Spend most of the time with my babys
22, Make sure my kids have a place to stay in like buy another house in another state
23, Take them to disney world
24, And as there older have enough to pay their college for their carrier
25, And go to Mexico